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Unfading Scars

Rating: 4.9
shame I can not hide
ugliness clearly displayed
shattered life never mended
brokenness written upon flesh
ashamed of unfading scars
tormented battle rages in my mind
screaming- just lay down the knife
weakness, failing again
as another scar is traced
bottled up tears releasing
washing over crimson wrists
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Jk M 18 January 2021
Stunning and haunting ??
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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2016
Shattered life never mended! ! Nice work.
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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012
So intense! Yes, that's the word. Please, read some of my words, Silent Scream / A Rose by Anyother Name... ect, there is more, so much more! Great Ink! -Kelly
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Captain Cur 19 May 2012
An ugly topic beautifully written. The conflict in emotions resolved in words, because these words touch us the readers. We all have scars, whether visible or hidden. The wounds heal but the marks remain. Each healed scar must remind us that we have won that particular battle. Now we all must resolve to win the war!
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Joe Black 28 April 2012
Wonderful write. Very vividly written. thank you and continue writing.
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Dead Leaf 07 April 2012
A GOOD WRITE....NICE ONE..
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Ency Bearis 26 March 2012
A well versed pain and frustration, expressed up to the utmost point when the scars lingers upon you
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wow thats was so beautiful it i no how it fill i have a lot of same to i wish would just go away but rlly nice job
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Cooper Gilliland 16 March 2012
The way you captured the moment and froze it in time is deeply intense.
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Romeo Della Valle 15 March 2012
Wow! I clearly hear myself through your well crafted and touching poem! Thank you for sharing this amazing write and try to bury the past and move forward facing the Sun without going blind again. Be Strong, my dear friend! Like I said in my poem titled: In the Pursuit of Happiness, what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a Blessing from the sky 10+++ well deserved! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Your friend, Romeo -NYC (http: //www.romeodellavalle.com)
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