Smoking Poem by Steven Pimentel

Smoking

Rating: 5.0


He smokes, I smoke
then the others is smoking too
what this world is coming to
people dying & livers is too..

why do people smoke?
& why do they get in groups?

Life is getting worst
& the people are getting too..

ten dollars a bag
how the hell is that helping you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacky Dorantes 13 July 2009

It's so true, we do do it in groups. I guess some ppl do it in groups to feel less wrong about it? At least that was the case with me. Love the poem, it's hard cause you get adedicted. I know it was hard for me to stop, but you gotta do what u gotta do, right? Great job.

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Ritty Patnaik 13 July 2009

to be frank we get nowhere with smoking, rather we become slave to it.it needs good determination, to stop this, because it will harm our systenm in the long run.

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Natasha Wellington 11 July 2009

My Rents Smoke + My Sister; its Disgusting, But i Love This Poem.. Because i HATE Smoking!

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Lola Hi 11 July 2009

nice poem i hope that when others read it realise the danger of smoking.

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A T 11 July 2009

well done... well done

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Indira Renganathan 31 July 2009

I pray, the smokers' world listens to you....a needy poem...great write

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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

i hope all smokers see this poem! ! ! ! very good idea i liked it....thanks for sharing!

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Kushal Vaishnani 22 July 2009

Your poem is short but impressively succinct.. Ingrained with a nice message. Full 10 Kushal

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

a good advocate write against smoking...very good I am with you with this write...a powerful message....10

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2009

Good job Steven, short and sweet to the core.

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