He smokes, I smoke
then the others is smoking too
what this world is coming to
people dying & livers is too..
why do people smoke?
& why do they get in groups?
Life is getting worst
& the people are getting too..
ten dollars a bag
how the hell is that helping you...
to be frank we get nowhere with smoking, rather we become slave to it.it needs good determination, to stop this, because it will harm our systenm in the long run.
My Rents Smoke + My Sister; its Disgusting, But i Love This Poem.. Because i HATE Smoking!
nice poem i hope that when others read it realise the danger of smoking.
I pray, the smokers' world listens to you....a needy poem...great write
i hope all smokers see this poem! ! ! ! very good idea i liked it....thanks for sharing!
Your poem is short but impressively succinct.. Ingrained with a nice message. Full 10 Kushal
a good advocate write against smoking...very good I am with you with this write...a powerful message....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's so true, we do do it in groups. I guess some ppl do it in groups to feel less wrong about it? At least that was the case with me. Love the poem, it's hard cause you get adedicted. I know it was hard for me to stop, but you gotta do what u gotta do, right? Great job.