The Song In Me Poem by Steven Pimentel

The Song In Me

Rating: 4.8


My life is a song
when i walk i feel the beat..

walking thru your streets
hold on take a seat..

from the beats of my feet
to the singing in my head..

Long lasting song
so i never gave it a title..

my life is a song
so this song will keep going
as long as i go..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melanie Guerrero 11 July 2009

'My life is a song when i walk i feel the beat.. walking thru your streets hold on take a seat' Fav.Lines Thats qood Writtin! ! !

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Ted M 11 July 2009

Nice flow and good rhythm

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Natasha Wellington 11 July 2009

Love It (= Brill Poem; My Life is A Song <3

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Carol Gall 11 July 2009

love your writing so great

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Chitra - 11 July 2009

a wonderful sonorous rhythm that we all call life well written

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Allan Macli Borges 25 July 2009

what a beautiful poem. life is a long lasting song, let's keep the beat up!

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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

wow! ! ! stunning! ! ! ! keep writing and show us what is in your mind! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

beat up, beat down and keep dancing to the beat of the drums and dance to the rhythm of your song to keep your life lively...a provoking theme written....

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2009

Keep that song in you! !

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

How wonderful to feel you have a song in your heart, a rhythm in your feet..... Ruthy

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