Kumarmani Mahakul

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Snow And Shining - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Snow shines up to the time
When winter season covers veil,
When dawn opens face and sees,
Snow shines with brightness.
Beauty motivates and attracts,
We see snow and adore nature.

But when in winter sun rises,
Beauty never fades is true,
But shining snow melts more,
No hardness remain within,
And it becomes water and flows,
Melting age moves ahead
To serve and sacrifice,
To give wisdom of truth,
Water flows to quench thirst,
Drinking this all creatures
And soil in both shores
All quench thirst and sing.

When a materialistic atheist
Becoming rich becomes hard,
He shines form far like snow,
But when wisdom rises in mind,
He starts melting gradually,
He becomes soft and bows,
Like a lotus floats in pond,
He floats in water of time.

Beauty of personality covers,
Snow no one can drink at all,
But water all love to drink,
A mystery is hidden behind,
Atheist melts to become theist
Great wisdom of God does miracle.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,04 September 2018. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: change, philosophical , spiritual

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Snow And Shining by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/19/2019 8:50:00 PM)

    Hidden behind! ! !


    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Mahtab Bangalee (9/11/2018 2:00:00 AM)

    theist and atheist - just slight difference between both words but greatly distance in belief and disbelief

    and those who can discover himself I think both will be in one platform of GOD with PEACE.
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  • (9/8/2018 7:42:00 AM)

    Indeed, Heart melts........... I quote from your very poem...Loved it.
    Beauty of personality covers,
    Snow no one can drink at all,
    But water all love to drink,
    A mystery is hidden behind,
    Atheist melts to become theist
    Great wisdom of God does miracle
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  • Aniruddha Pathak (9/5/2018 6:19:00 AM)

    A splendid work on spirituality, philosophical in nature. It lifts you up,10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas Lagos (9/5/2018 6:12:00 AM)

    A fascinating poem, mr Mahakul! Thanks! (Report)Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (9/5/2018 5:06:00 AM)

    A spiritual change is truly a miracle. Nature is the reflection of God. By studying nature, one can get closer to God and can experience enlightenment. A beautiful philosophical write. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (9/5/2018 12:50:00 AM)

    Such a splendid write, Kumarmani...............10++++++++++++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 4, 2018



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