Sonnet- I-Once Again I Betrayed My Soul Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Sonnet- I-Once Again I Betrayed My Soul

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Once again I betrayed my soul,
After making firm vows,
Defying to play the role,
And accepting that time loves.
How many times I swear,
To be perfect and glorious,
And how many times I dare,
After being so cautious.

Let me not follow the whim,
Wavering mind I should lock,
In times fantasy I shouldn't swim,
And refuse every whimsical knock.
My own soul I shouldn't wrong,
After being headstrong.

'24/12/2014 Vijaypur Karnataka India'

Tuesday, December 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 26 December 2014

My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. Nice thoughts.............10

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 January 2015

Beautiful flow of words. Wavering mind I should lock, And refuse every whimsical knock. Thoughtful message to be followed. Control self is difficult but for our peace and happiness, we have to be disciplined. Loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2015

My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. .....Nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks. .......10

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Rajesh Thankappan 27 July 2015

Often it is hard to stick to a resolution and this aspect of human fragility you have brought out so beautifully in this poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 16 May 2016

your wisdom is profound your presentation sound thank you my friend-10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2016

We do fall many times in life! But, we have to wake up and move on once again; with a positive mind. Nice work.

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Melvina Germain 17 October 2015

A profound and very strong message here, I liked this very much...wonderful insight and great wisdom.....

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M Asim Nehal 23 September 2015

Very well thought and written poem, I liked it...........100 on 10.

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Shankaran Kutty 14 September 2015

It is not a sin to err, but it is a sin if you don't learn from your mistakes. By acknowledging your mistake, you have taken the first step. You have done no wrong

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