Once again I betrayed my soul,
After making firm vows,
Defying to play the role,
And accepting that time loves.
How many times I swear,
To be perfect and glorious,
And how many times I dare,
After being so cautious.
Let me not follow the whim,
Wavering mind I should lock,
In times fantasy I shouldn't swim,
And refuse every whimsical knock.
My own soul I shouldn't wrong,
After being headstrong.
'24/12/2014 Vijaypur Karnataka India'
Beautiful flow of words. Wavering mind I should lock, And refuse every whimsical knock. Thoughtful message to be followed. Control self is difficult but for our peace and happiness, we have to be disciplined. Loved reading it.
My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. .....Nicely envisioned. Enjoyed. Thanks. .......10
Often it is hard to stick to a resolution and this aspect of human fragility you have brought out so beautifully in this poem.
your wisdom is profound your presentation sound thank you my friend-10
We do fall many times in life! But, we have to wake up and move on once again; with a positive mind. Nice work.
A profound and very strong message here, I liked this very much...wonderful insight and great wisdom.....
Very well thought and written poem, I liked it...........100 on 10.
It is not a sin to err, but it is a sin if you don't learn from your mistakes. By acknowledging your mistake, you have taken the first step. You have done no wrong
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My own soul I shouldn't wrong, After being headstrong. Nice thoughts.............10