After that day of our departure,
I gave my soul nothing but torture,
Calling you to memory all the time,
Made my moments the most sublime,
You were here with me like the sun of dawn,
Sat I looking you ending in smoke every plan,
How can I stop you, knowing no way no reason,
To have forever in my heart a lily, rose' season,
Is this my fate this my destiny? Looted and in despair,
Or with your hand will my hand be ever in pair?
Will ever my tired head rest on your soft arm,
Will my name be written ever on your white palm?
I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are,
Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,
This is beautifully constructed. The flow is excellent and I especially love the second stanza, I close my eyes and make a wish that this ends happily. x
g8 poem...how a special person drives away our emotions and makes us crazy...beautifully written..specially the last 2 lines...nice ending
A beautiful poem, liked the lines I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,
I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star.. Very nice poem. I like it's intensity
Step by step the longing for the beloved gathers momentum, the intensity grows and finally the longing ends. Nice flow
'tis an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! good work! ! ! Keep on writing! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
U were here with me like the sun of dawn. Awesome. Loved it.