Sonnet 'Memory' Poem by Jahan Zeb

Sonnet 'Memory'

Rating: 4.4


After that day of our departure,
I gave my soul nothing but torture,
Calling you to memory all the time,
Made my moments the most sublime,

You were here with me like the sun of dawn,
Sat I looking you ending in smoke every plan,
How can I stop you, knowing no way no reason,
To have forever in my heart a lily, rose' season,

Is this my fate this my destiny? Looted and in despair,
Or with your hand will my hand be ever in pair?
Will ever my tired head rest on your soft arm,
Will my name be written ever on your white palm?

I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are,
Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shivani Misra 18 October 2012

U were here with me like the sun of dawn. Awesome. Loved it.

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Stevie Taite 18 October 2012

This is beautifully constructed. The flow is excellent and I especially love the second stanza, I close my eyes and make a wish that this ends happily. x

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A B 18 October 2012

g8 poem...how a special person drives away our emotions and makes us crazy...beautifully written..specially the last 2 lines...nice ending

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Hazel Durham 17 October 2012

Inspired write with great depth of emotions!

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Dave Walker 17 October 2012

A great poem, like it.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

A beautiful poem, liked the lines I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,

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Rameeza Nasim 02 March 2017

beautiful sonnet very nice

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Fatma Ballaswud 22 October 2012

I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star.. Very nice poem. I like it's intensity

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Sanjay Mehta 22 October 2012

Step by step the longing for the beloved gathers momentum, the intensity grows and finally the longing ends. Nice flow

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2012

'tis an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! good work! ! ! Keep on writing! ! ! ! !

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Malakand Pakistan
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