Sparkling Love Poem by Valsa George

Sparkling Love

Rating: 5.0


As he gazed on my face
I saw waves of emotion
rise and crash
in his deep almond eyes
and I became a river
hurtling down to join
the mighty current

When he whispered to me
honeyed words of passion
in the enormity of silence
I blossomed
into
a red tulip of love

As he played on the strings
of my heart's violin
I got tuned
into an alluring symphony

When he held my palms
I evolved into
a beautiful painting
on a blank canvas

When he cupped my face
to stamp on my lips
the seal of love
I became
a flitting butterfly

When he lifted me up
in his arms
all the stars came down
to see the spark in my eyes
wondering if it outdid
their combined lustre

Sparkling Love
Tuesday, October 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 24 October 2017

Wonderful romantic poem.. Loved every line

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Sekharan Pookkat 24 October 2017

A beautiful song of love Laced and sparkled in the almond eyes Reflected in the strings of heart As the wings of a butterfly- thank you for sharing this wonderful poem my ten too

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Bill Cantrell 24 October 2017

An absolutely brilliant poem! Only one who has experienced love could write such as this, a river joining the current, when he whispered to me honeyed words of passion, in the enormity of silence, I blossomed, stamp my lips the seal of love, just a perfect poem in every way my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2017

Usually Valsa George does not write such love poems, but when she writes she always proves she can write wonderful love poems.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 October 2017

Such a lovely and heartwarming poem, Valsa... a perfect 10+++

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Dimitrios Galanis 20 December 2017

A great writting, Valsa.I hope until evening to have translated it.I feel that my language lacks something like that.

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Glen Kappy 26 November 2017

Nice, Valsa. Ah! love. -Glen

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Muhammad Ali 23 November 2017

love for the soulmate and the spells of magic. the best one can express. beautiful poem

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Savita Tyagi 13 November 2017

Sparkling and captivating as love itself. Love has power to transform magically. Loved the last paragraph most. Thanks for sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 November 2017

Supwrb poem worth reading.Nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.

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