The First Love Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

The First Love

Rating: 3.3


Let's go hand in hand to a strange spot
Secretly, stealthily, without paying heed
To what they perceive and say of us
We'll take a walk in hillsides in pair
Expressing our earnest love in air
My heart craves to hold you fast
Holding you tight in love's art
The river of our love will flow
And a delicate murmur will echo
Through its sparkling overflow!

Accept this rose and read my note:
I'm ready to climb stiff thorny hills
To carry tons of loads on my head
For you; only for you my sweetheart!
We'll move on and on here and there
We'd roam all across the whole world,
Tasting the climates of love everywhere
I'll grab you in seconds in dangers
To lodge instant fight with brutal tigers
To save you from all disasters!

We'd passionately espouse sweet talks
We'd ramble in love without clocks
Our deep romance will prolong hours
The elasticity of our romantic hours
Would be stretched to million years
Our love will defy all odds to appear
We'll burn us with the flames of love
And its smoke would cloud the mob
Only the green hills will peep through
To monitor our intense romance!

The sinuous droplets of our acute romance
Will run like a rivulet of our deep love
Enchanting the sweet music of united souls
Come on my sweetheart, find some way
Let's rejoice our maiden romantic day!


Copyright@ Poet,14 February,2019

Wednesday, February 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 13 February 2019

'The elasticity of our romantic hours Would be stretched to a million years'. A poem of pure love, at its prettiest and most passionate! A timely addition for Valentine's Day!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2019

This is the best poem so far I have composed! I am delighted to receive the first feed back from you! I am thankful to you dear friend! Stay happy and blessed!

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 February 2019

You have expressed what every two-some on this day might have in mind, but very few can express it out so clearly.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 February 2019

I am delighted to have such a fascinating comment sir! I am grateful to you!

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Prof Kavita Arora 20 March 2019

A great romantic poem with thrilling expression... I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for inviting me to read such a marvelous poem! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2022

....THE#

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2022

#The fast love*****

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Jayne Davies 01 May 2022

Such a wonderful poem. Delightful to read. Five stars*

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 March 2022

The entire waters of Sindhu, Ganga and Brahmaputra have flown through my life, nothing is left! ,

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 March 2022

First love! So nostalgic.. memories haunt me even after half a century…

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