Arrr! Ready kids..
Who lives in a seaweed shack by the sea?
Captain jack crazy and loony is he,
With sandpit eyes and kelp locks,
Captain jack silly as a fox,
Drank his rum, and walk his plank,
Captain jack smelly and rank,
Captain jack in the seaweed shack!
Captain jack in the seaweed shack!
Who has friends in Davey Jones locker?
Captain jack the ship rocker,
With a wooden leg and scary beard,
Captain jack funny and weird,
Don't cross his steal, and be kind to his pet ill,
Captain jack in the seaweed shack!
Captain jack in the seaweed shack!
humorous and creative...your title applies very well to your poem; it is indeed a twist to an original... leslie
Im a total wrecked pinned by the heavy crack of your funny Jack! !
arrrrrrrr your poem has lots of twist and it makes me laff. 'Captain jack silly as a fox, Drank his rum, and walk his plank, Captain jack smelly and rank, ' Miles away I can smell that rum +++++++10 dear friend I liked your Twist has lots of pun- but more of fun. anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lol... that is Songe Bob with a twist alright and maybe Pirate's of The Caribbean... anyway this made me laugh, very great peice my dear friend. good job. Drank his rum, and walk his plank, Captain jack smelly and rank, thats great. Becca