Sublime Syrup Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Sublime Syrup

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Sugar dissolving in boiling water,
We prepare syrup to preserve fruit
And other food materials at home,
Rays dissolving in sun form sunbeam
And this falls on Earth everyday,
To protect creation sunbeam loves,
All plants love to drink nectar,
Wisdom makes life great at each step.

Greatest charmer has sprinkled colours
In his drawing canvas in dual turn,
Everything is old and everything is new,
Common man gets confusion and forgets,
But nature obeys every universal law,
God is the greatest attractive personality,
We are ever attracted towards him,
His invitation we find through sunrise,
His greatest teaching we receive.

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup,
This protects during birth and death
And during life's process and journey,
When there is sunrise there is sunset,
If a flower blooms then this wilts too,
Still sunbeam protects every creature
For long time from hazards and disease,
Wonderful creation is full of wonder!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,16 May 2019. All rights reserved.

Sublime Syrup
Thursday, May 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,philosophical ,spiritual,sunrise
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo Kumarmani Mahakul,4 September 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 16 May 2019

fortunately sunbeams more benign than boiling water

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2019

Life, Greatest Charmer! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 17 May 2019

The invisible nectar of wisdom! A perfect vision, a perfect verse Kumarmani.

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God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, So beautifully thought and worded, full of wisdom. Kumarmani ji, My Namaskar!

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Valsa George 18 May 2019

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, Sublime thoughts put in meaningful verse!

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Pushpendra Patel 13 June 2020

For medication we make syrup and for making some sweet dishes too. But more important syrup we need is wisdom of God. This is great write.

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Susan Williams 21 August 2019

A poem with the greatest topic of all- our Lord God creator of all things good! ! ! Thank you! !

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

God's wisdom is sweet and sublime syrup, This protects during birth and death And during life's process and journey, When there is sunrise there is sunset, _A great write in praise of God.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 May 2019

Nature is the greatest invitation to Him, sunrise especially. Well said.

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Indira Renganathan 20 May 2019

I like the second stanza very much...specially the lines 'God is the greatest attractive personality, We are ever attracted towards him, His invitation we find through sunrise, His greatest teaching we receive...a beautiful imagery that sunrise is God's invitation...great poem..thanks a lot for all your comments on my poems Kumar

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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