Street Of A Park Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Street Of A Park

Rating: 5.0


Children are eager to visit
This park is opened for them,
Evening has arrived with hope,
Time of fun attracts attention.
Walking in a street of this
They plan to swing and jump,
They want to sing and play,
A nice moment they have to feel.

This street of a park is nice,
On concrete floor hope walks,
Both side green plants greet,
Grass whispers to have a talk,
Children will gently crawl on,
Twilight creates a Moon inside.

This street of park is very calm,
Shadows gossip with leaves in joy,
Wooden boundary covers the pond,
Green rays falling on its water,
These make wonderful reflection.
Twilight sprinkles dream to catch.

Street of a park motivates many
To walk in path of calmness and
Peace adores inner core of heart,
Greenness make every dream true.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 July 2018. All rights reserved.

Street Of A Park
Saturday, July 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: road,garden,green,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,22 July 2018. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 28 July 2018

A wonderful poem, a park is enchantment to those who love nature, on concrete floor, , hope walks, this is beautiful poem, very well written my friend!

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Wieslaw Musialowski 28 July 2018

This street of park is very calm, Shadows gossip with leaves in joy, Very serene, Kumarmani! 10++

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 28 July 2018

A beautiful piece of poetry, it vividly depicts the tranquilty of a park. A really wonderful write,10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 July 2018

A beautiful poem... I like to take my children to the park with me. It is the perfect place that provides peace of mind. Liked the last stanza most! (10)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2018

A park has been made purely for enjoyment and recreation. Sometimes it is a showcase of nature. It brings peace and serenity.These wonderful attributes of a park have been vividly conveyed in the magnificent write. A great poem worthy of 10++++.

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Susan Williams 02 August 2018

Shadows gossip with leaves- - - - - - - - - - -this image is so evocative that I stopped reading instantly and backed up and reread it several times and enjoyed the sight and sounds of leaves gossiping with shadows. Such lovely delicate writing, my friend! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2018

Yes -some street parks are such like this- Street of a park motivates many To walk in path of calmness and Peace adores inner core of heart, Greenness make every dream true.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 July 2018

Motivates many! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Flower Navarre 28 July 2018

Ever so beautifully painted in poem! .. And another, ever so beautiful photo too! .. Ever such heart warming description, and feel of the moments... Nature... The joy, calmness... and peace too! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Mj Lemon 28 July 2018

Some of the greatest joys and memories come from those warm evenings spent in inviting parks. Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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