Surprise Poem by Luwi Habte

Surprise

Rating: 4.5


The hideous
Was precious
And quite hilarious

The cruel I hopeful
Was merciful
And quite peaceful

The one I know with lots of felony
For sure was not flighty
But so seemly and kind lady

The diabolic one I consider
I was mistaken, she was neither
But discerning, blessed and she care

God is the one who let me see the truth
Who let me find the real faith
From the keen lady of truth

Dedicated to Haben

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruerd Visser 14 July 2009

This makes me long to read more from you poetic treasure trove. Our heavenly friends are truly inspiring aren´t they? Thankks for sharing your treasured truth with is. Huhaha from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

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Anjali Sinha 14 July 2009

wow a nice poem from a keen lady of truth anjali

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beautiful poem Lui..we have always to seek the truth...you expressed your feeling so well..

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Yelena M. 12 July 2009

You express deep ideas through a unique usage of language in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.Best wishes to you. A.

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J Lee 12 July 2009

i do not know how to describe it but i love it all of us are like 2 side of a coin gd n bad in all it is for those who know us best to know which is which

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 14 August 2009

Very often we have wrong perceptions about people and we tend to become unnecessarily suspicious of human nature.But some incidents created by the Almighty help us do away with these feelings.The poem is a very good reflection of how we transform our beliefs about an individual towards better.Briefly expressed but excellent. To me friend is someone who may not join you at your good times, but will extend a rock-solid support during your bad times, who may not speak a single good word in front of you but always tell good things behind your back, who will maintain hundred percent confidentialityity with you for the shared secrets for ever and above all who will want to continue friendship without any expectations from you. But I am a bit skeptical, at this age, is there any such friend? Or even if he/she is there do we value him/her?

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AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 18 July 2009

Very nice poem...id love reading it! ! !

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Malini Kadir 18 July 2009

from the keen lady of truth...I liked this line a lot... friendship is learning to love a person with all his facets....learning to continue to be friends...is adjusting to differences and seeing the spice of life together.....

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ah! what a slanty, sane and soulful view of life.... keep wriitng my child

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Nazia Hamsakutty 15 July 2009

Love you for your poems my dear poet! ! ! Love you for your truth & innocense in thought! ! ! Go ahead....

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