Surreal Life Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Surreal Life

Rating: 5.0


On the autumnal dew
The delighted legs of Sun are walking

Through the mild coldness of breeze
The morning grassy leaves are dancing

On the joyful wings of sky birds
My heart of life is struggling

Yellow sighs of time is mending the unreachable horizon
Wave of tsunami is scathing the parched land of newborn

Solar eclipse is coming to the dungeon of Hades
Emptiness of living vessel is bidding with top baits

©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
06/11/2022

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 November 2022

Stunning imagery. Love it!

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Pallab Chaudhury 11 November 2022

Beautiful poem reflecting the current events.. Well done dear poet. With best wishes./PC

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Nosheen Irfan 12 November 2022

Sterling imagery! Moods of nature and humans juxtaposed so well. Bravo!

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2022

And Congratulations! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 13 November 2022

Such a deeply heart moving poem so beautifully written! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 November 2022

Beautiful and meaningful Couplets, Mahtab.Excellently done!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 November 2022

CONGRATULATIONS, dear Mahtab, your poem is ion Rank 95 in the Best Poems of Member Poets List. Mesmerizing poem to ponder upon.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 November 2022

Lovely poem with spectacular images of the universe dear Mahtab. Top score + To my favourite

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