Swimming Sun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul
Swimming Sun
Freshly risen sun has shown face,
Swimming this is in sky's chest,
Swimming this is in water's chest,
No rest, no rest, this is swimming,
Creating its mirror images in pond,
Empowering every moment of love,
With its golden crown and pearls,
Sun is swimming towards Earth,
Welcoming and embracing tightly,
The pond shore grass is smiling,
Beside the flyover, near the city,
Smiling sun's swimming is reflected,
Nature's bountiful moment is counted,
Beauty's glance is justified more,
Palace inside water has whispered,
Golden ducks are swimming in joy,
No rest, no rest, fest is celebrated,
Compassionate heart is empowered,
God's grace through sun has entered,
Mother Earth's bosom is filled in milk,
For suckling the baby golden ducks,
Green juice is prepared for sun by leaves,
After swimming more from dawn to dusk,
Sun will be tired near dusk to rest,
Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly,
Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,17, May 2018. All rights reserved.
An uplifting visual delight and I love the concept of the sun swimming as it truly appears to be when rippling in the reflection on the water. Well done Kumarmani.10 +
'After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.'...everything has an end and a fresh start. Very nice poem on sun. Enjoyed. Deserved more than 10.
The joy that the sun brings indeed is found in the life that lives in, dwells upon the waters. This work has such magnificent imagery. A great poem, Kumarmani.
Swimming Sun! A perfect eye-catching title and a lovely memorable image for the reader to take away with him. Thank you!
wonderful way of describing, you make a tale like poetry, really enjoyed it :) especially this: Sun is swimming towards Earth, Welcoming and embracing tightly,
After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly....Beautiful contents! Loved reading it dear sir..Thanks for sharing! Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.
After swimming more from dawn to dusk, Sun will be tired near dusk to rest, Dawn's nectar is ready to serve freshly, Swimming sun is thinking to smile again.
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The imagery, the feeling, the scene, are magnificent! Beautifully painted words embalming with enchantment! A wonderful poem!