Symbol Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Symbol

Rating: 5.0


To sacrifice our love
To immolate ourselves
In a ceremonial way

Unbelievable rationale
Incredible goal
We have to obey

Abraham and Jacob
Lot and Noah
Wanted to say

Love comes to bless
The turf that wraps
Our heavenly clay

(2009/4/25)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 26 April 2009

Wonderful poem about love, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Anjali Sinha 26 April 2009

lovely verses --great poem surely ++10 anjali

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Ency Bearis 26 April 2009

wonderful verses...great poem...

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a true beautiful writting nightingale

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Estrella Baldemosa 26 April 2009

Abraham the father of many nations. What a great story! and the ceremonial sacrifice that almost killed his son Isaac and prior to that, the birth of his son Ishmael who is born of his wife's maid whose descendants now inhabited the present day Islamic nations. however it happened, it is symbolic...great write!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 May 2009

'Love comes to bless The turf that wraps Our heavenly clay' Nice lovely poem,10++

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

The symbol of love, the sacrifices and its blessings all comes together in marriage. Great poem! ! !

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Nasreen Dawood 02 May 2009

deep and true...once marked with love the heavenly clay will bear the mark...the symbol...thanx for the beautiful piece.

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a wonderful and meaningful poem

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Seema Chowdhury 27 April 2009

very very nice and touchy poem.

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