Tainted Throb......What We Do To Our Hearts! Poem by saadat tahir

Tainted Throb......What We Do To Our Hearts!

Rating: 5.0


Sent forth brisk aglow
Cut to a century’s plow
Sparkled; springy shone
Innocent child’s throne
Gentle rainbows shade
That within it pervade
Chivalrous out to lend
and every rule to bend
Along bumpy ride
An many a hazy tide
Not of natures make
Own breath upon it take
Scarred by myriad nick
Soulless needle prick
No more natures guide
Ceased souls pride
Callous riot had rob
Done to ruined throb.
Had own spears smite.
In low; perfidious night.
Once a guiding light!
Driven to scrawny blight.

(Islamabad)
(May 28,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 June 2009

Such a profound poem written crafted meticulously with fine end rhymes.............fine continous poem structured.....10+++

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Surayya Abbas 06 June 2009

Very different and deep poem. well done.

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Reshma Ramesh 06 June 2009

clap clap.....................

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Wow, the story telling flows so smooth and the rhyme makes it even better on this poem. You have a grasp of the written word and the heart. Thank you for sharing. :)

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Seema Chowdhury 03 June 2009

wow another one..... good work.

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2013

How hearts once pure and flawless are marred and deprived of their beauty on bumpy rides of life. And how Nature's guidance is ceased. It's one of your complicated poems not easy to understand at first reading.

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

Beautiful words, and yes we do all these things to our hearts, 10 Lynda xx

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rago rago 11 June 2009

a beautiful write.........plz see my 10 ++

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Kushal Vaishnani 11 June 2009

fabulous usage of words... splendid rhymes with ingrained message.10 ++++ Regards Kushal

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Anjali Sinha 08 June 2009

wowwwwwwww a plethora of rhymes for my tired eyes to shine a straight tenner from meeeeeeeee anjuuuuuu

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