behind the mountains
evening sun will rest tonight
sadness will emerge,
playing melancholy song
keeping me awake whole night
Beautiful, beautiful. That speaks for a lot of us. So simply expressed but these words carry a lot of weight.10
After birth death comes like after morning sun rises and rests in West for sunset. This is wise humor that talks about life...10
Oh, but I am sure it also motivates you to write mindblowing poems as well......Thanks, Kelly.
oh, the melancholy in these words- -you selected exactly the right words and exactly the right images and oh how immediately the sadness of this surrounded me. That is very good writing, my friend. 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sadness will emerge, playing melancholy song.. I too feel sad for the character..if someone does Yoga, he/she is always rejuvenated..Thank you for sharing Asim. Beautiful expression of comparing night to the sadness..
Thanks Much VS