Tanka - A Sad Evening Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - A Sad Evening

Rating: 5.0

behind the mountains
evening sun will rest tonight
sadness will emerge,
playing melancholy song
keeping me awake whole night

Sunday, August 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
Aarzoo Mehek 07 August 2016

We all carry that little sadness in our heart and it emerges when encountered with solitude. BEautiful thought Asim.10

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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016

Thanks Aarzoo....

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T Rajan Evol 07 August 2016

Nice tanka, Asimji..

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 August 2016

Life is like that at times! Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 11 August 2016

Beautiful, beautiful. That speaks for a lot of us. So simply expressed but these words carry a lot of weight.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

After birth death comes like after morning sun rises and rests in West for sunset. This is wise humor that talks about life...10

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Kelly Kurt 07 August 2016

This describes my nightly ritual for nearly 15 years

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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016

Oh, but I am sure it also motivates you to write mindblowing poems as well......Thanks, Kelly.

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Susan Williams 07 August 2016

oh, the melancholy in these words- -you selected exactly the right words and exactly the right images and oh how immediately the sadness of this surrounded me. That is very good writing, my friend. 10+++

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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016

Thank u so much Susan, you did a prefect analysis of my tanka....

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