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Sunday, August 7, 2016

Tanka - A Sad Evening

Rating: 5.0
behind the mountains
evening sun will rest tonight
sadness will emerge,
playing melancholy song
keeping me awake whole night
M Asim Nehal
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 August 2016
Life is like that at times! Thanks for sharing.
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Nosheen Irfan 11 August 2016
Beautiful, beautiful. That speaks for a lot of us. So simply expressed but these words carry a lot of weight.10
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016
After birth death comes like after morning sun rises and rests in West for sunset. This is wise humor that talks about life...10
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Kelly Kurt 07 August 2016
This describes my nightly ritual for nearly 15 years
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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016
Oh, but I am sure it also motivates you to write mindblowing poems as well......Thanks, Kelly.
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Susan Williams 07 August 2016
oh, the melancholy in these words- -you selected exactly the right words and exactly the right images and oh how immediately the sadness of this surrounded me. That is very good writing, my friend. 10+++
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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016
Thank u so much Susan, you did a prefect analysis of my tanka....
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Aarzoo Mehek 07 August 2016
We all carry that little sadness in our heart and it emerges when encountered with solitude. BEautiful thought Asim.10
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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016
Thanks Aarzoo....
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T Rajan Evol 07 August 2016
Nice tanka, Asimji..
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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016
Thanks Mr. TRE
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 August 2016
sadness will emerge, playing melancholy song.. I too feel sad for the character..if someone does Yoga, he/she is always rejuvenated..Thank you for sharing Asim. Beautiful expression of comparing night to the sadness..
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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2016
Thanks Much VS
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