behind the mountains
evening sun will rest tonight
sadness will emerge,
playing melancholy song
keeping me awake whole night
We all carry that little sadness in our heart and it emerges when encountered with solitude. BEautiful thought Asim.10
Nice tanka, Asimji..
Life is like that at times! Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful, beautiful. That speaks for a lot of us. So simply expressed but these words carry a lot of weight.10
After birth death comes like after morning sun rises and rests in West for sunset. This is wise humor that talks about life...10
This describes my nightly ritual for nearly 15 years
Oh, but I am sure it also motivates you to write mindblowing poems as well......Thanks, Kelly.
oh, the melancholy in these words- -you selected exactly the right words and exactly the right images and oh how immediately the sadness of this surrounded me. That is very good writing, my friend. 10+++
Thank u so much Susan, you did a prefect analysis of my tanka....
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