Moments come and go,
Leaving their footprints upon my path.
The ambience that surrounds
Completes me.
A tear-dropp of my being,
Gathers in my eye.
I try to hide it,
But it reveals me.
Your ability to grasp the depth of a situation seems to be marvellous at your age and I am analysing whether it could be due to varied experiences of sorrow that have surfaced in your 18 years that make you think so deeply. With you, blessings, arya.
well, wht do i say about one who writes with such deep thought at this age...!
good revealing poem drops...keep posting poems, Sarvesh...ten for your impressive show up write...
tears, something that express our feeling, which is sad or glad.. well penned..
wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! dropp a tear I cry +++++10 regards anjali
A tear dropp u want to hide it; but it reveals u! ! ! ! Wow! Terrific piece..........great poem..................10++++++++++++++++++++
each tear dropp has its own power to reliev the pain to maeke us feel goood n lt mre
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem.You are quite talented.