Bharati Nayak

Tear Tells A Tale - Poem by Bharati Nayak

Tear from the land of Nigeria
Tells a story of pain
A story of being chained
Chained in her body and soul
Soul of a beautiful girl
Girl of such tender age
Being separated
From her loving family
And kept away in some dungeon

Tear tells a story
How she wishes to be freed
And get back to the warm hugs
Of her parents and siblings
Keeping the fire of hope kindling
Tear awaits some angels
Awaits for the day
When they will be coming
Keeping the fire of hope kindling
She wishes the story
To have a happy ending.

Topic(s) of this poem: darkness, freedom

Poet's Notes about The Poem

One poem on the net touched me

Comments about Tear Tells A Tale by Bharati Nayak

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (6/13/2018 9:37:00 AM)

    It is a sad story that not only touches you but also touches the all readers. Your inscription on abducted girl is so touching and moving. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

    Bharati Nayak (6/15/2018 9:36:00 PM)

    Thank you Sir, poet Sri Kumarmani Mahakul for your kind appreciation of this poem.It is real story of innumerable girls who get lost or abducted , being separated from parents and family, their lives become unending torture in the dark dungeon.Society's big people and law makers know this, but close their eyes.

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  • (1/28/2017 12:21:00 PM)

    beautiful sad, oh sadness is beautiful. worries can be marketed. and that one girl, one girl out of countless same... that tear, that wait, that story also live, and game be played. (Report) Reply

    Bharati Nayak (1/28/2017 6:26:00 PM)

    I wrote this poem after reading a poem about Chibok girls in a blog post of Timhiee.

  • (1/28/2017 12:18:00 PM)

    beautiful sad, oh sadn (Report) Reply

  • Chinedu Dike (1/17/2017 10:15:00 PM)

    Thanks a million times for this insightful piece on the plight of the abducted girls. Always remain blessed. (Report) Reply

    Bharati Nayak (1/18/2017 1:22:00 AM)

    Thank you Chinedu Dike for your kind words which are always inspiring.This poem I wrote after reading a blog post by Timhee'' on Wordpress..His poem really brought tears to my eyes.

  • (1/15/2016 3:20:00 PM)

    this could be girls that BK
    has taken away in middle
    of the night...poor girls
    whole world didn't do much
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  • Clarence Prince (12/7/2015 10:31:00 AM)

    Of her parents and siblings
    Keeping the fire of hope kindling
    Awaits for the day....
    It's so very sad!
    Thanks for sharing, Bharati Nayak!
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/7/2015 7:16:00 AM)

    The world today is full of hatred and war! Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/7/2015 6:04:00 AM)

    We wish too the story should have a happy ending. It hurts when small girls are tortured and kept in inhuman condition and exploited. An eye opener. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (12/7/2015 4:30:00 AM)

    Keeping the fire of hope kindling
    Tear awaits some angels..........
    hope awaits at door of Angel
    heart when stifles being parted with...very poignant write, yet heart breaking story, thanks for sharing
    (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (12/6/2015 11:10:00 AM)

    Thank you all dear poets for your touching comments.The story may be true.It may not be life story of the one who penned it.But it is true story of thousands or lakhs of such poor girls who get lost..They lose their parents, home, siblings and all address for contact.Their story never come out All their identity is lost in some darkness.The day I read a poem by one unknown poet I felt like crying.This poem I wrote on the verge of moment. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/6/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    Is it a true story? ? I feel the emotions in this... A lot... I hope things will be brighter n better soon (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/5/2015 7:29:00 AM)

    lovely poem, a mood of sadness pervades throughout the whole poem, well penned poem, thanks for shairng (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (12/5/2015 4:36:00 AM)

    Every teardrop that is shed and the ones that remain buried inside has a story to tell... You captured the tragedy of a little girl trapped in a dungeon very aptly without taking a melodramatic vein or going preachy either... I respect this poem Bharti.. This is one of the best poems of yours that I have read... Wonderful work.. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 5, 2015

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