Tempted Poem by David Harris

Tempted

Rating: 4.6


I walk down the street
A pretty woman passes
I stop, turn and stare.
Her bottom wiggles
Oooh, I’m tempted
Then my conscience kicks in
To remind me that
I have a wife, three kids and a cat

30 Jan 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 10 September 2016

Especially the cat! Always the first consideration. A lovely account of a daily experience. Still we have to thank the girls for those lovely wiggles which feed our momentary fantasies. Well deserved poem of the day, David. Congrats

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Kelly Kurt 10 September 2016

And ethics. Congrats, David

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2016

Temptation! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Theodora Onken 11 April 2007

Oh but thank goodness for conscience! We're all tempted at times, but it is our conscience that keeps us in place. Loved the poem as usual, Theo

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2007

Look but oh dont touch... the cat would be devasted...David 10

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Mizzy ........ 10 September 2016

Those shapely bottoms are the main cause of procreation......nicely written poem!

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Babatunde Aremu 10 September 2016

A real life experience that men goes through daily. However, most only end in tempations only the weak is ensnared. Great work!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 September 2016

Very nice. You obeyed call of your conscience that is nice. Loved it.

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Clarence Prince 10 September 2016

Good for you, your conscience lives!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 September 2016

Her bottom wiggles Oooh, I’m tempted Then my conscience kicks in To remind me that I have a wife, three kids and a cat It's a great little poem presenting male psychology. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.10 for it. Subhas

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David Harris

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