That Fresh Breath! Poem by Siddartha Montik

That Fresh Breath!

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my past is erased,
my present is clipped...
my future camouflaged!

any speck of thought is gripped in fear,
any contemplation ending in suspicion,
I'm not sure of any next second!

ethics shout loud to check my perception,
'not all is as it seem, not all can be at blame! '

my senses seem going berserk....,
indication remained only in utter pain,
burning in every breath and its work,
getting me in such treacherous trauma,
in the end tossing me into an eternal irk!

can't be like this in any of my make-up,
could be the reason lying with no basis,
after all nothing can be beyond the 'karma', the thesis!

no wonder i starve for a fresh breath,
even as hottest but as fresh!

or even my honest compromise,
to get shot in a split second,
to be forged under a sledge-hammer,
to sublimate in a blast-furnace!

all I want is 'that fresh breath'!

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Saturday, September 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 06 November 2016

The life a great experience to be experienced and reviewed frequently for a good voyage or journey to the oblivion. Wonderful poem.

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Brian Jani 13 May 2014

Siddartha I enjoyed reading this one keep it up

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 14 November 2016

Very direct and powerful words in wanting that Fresh Breath. Very Good!

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Bill Cantrell 16 November 2016

Vivid emotions in quest for fresh air, nice poetry my friend.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2016

Past, present and future! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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that Freash Breath as human! 16 February 2019

yet the German way of Medication made me suffer and still am in..and had to Write these lines and in pain..and still

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Charmaine J Forde 22 September 2018

You are a brilliant writer!

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Siddartha Montik 31 May 2018

All I want is thhat Freshest BREATH.. and even now!

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Thabani Khumalo 20 May 2018

i want to contact the source of the inspiration, what is it?

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2017

Siddartha, such an interesting write??????

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