The Better Gems Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

The Better Gems

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What's better than gold?
A heart of gold and a golden rule
Thus donot over the mined thing drool.

What's better than pearls?
Any pearls of wisdom
grant the oyster some freedom

What's better than diamonds?
Supernovas that dazzle like them
So fret not if you cannot
afford the earthly
underground gem

What's better than rubies red?
Carmine roses and rosy lips
I do and maybe you too
already have them

What's better than emerald?
Feline eyes glowing in the dark!
Ah Lord! that fluorescent spark!

What's better than silver?
The hope that every cloud has a silver lining
Even miners they don't enjoy the mining

What's better than amber?
Amber eyes in God's variety of eyeball shades
Ah! those ebony-eyed maidens and maids.

And whether it be
zircon or amethyst
sapphire or lapis lazuli
agate opal or tanzanite
what tis far better
than all these gems put together
is anyone known as a
'gem of a person'
Now it's up to you to go
beyond your flesh and blood
and be a guiding star!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Graham Thompson 24 May 2013

What is better than gold? You are - and the way you represent true and humble humanity. Loved the poem.

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Shahzia Batool 30 October 2012

Beautiful poemZaynub! it is really beautiful! you have a style to develop the logic and arguments behind your point....the phrase gem of a person is rightly used for your purpose...

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Hans Vr 15 October 2012

Fully agree with the wonderful ideas expressed in this beautiful poem

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Hazel Durham 14 October 2012

I loved this poem so original with a great message!

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Anthony Wickham 20 September 2012

very nice..keep up the good work.

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Tom Allport 26 October 2019

A gem of a write that is more precious than gold.....wonderfully penned.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 June 2017

'What's better than silver? The hope that every cloud has a silver lining Even miners they don't enjoy the mining' - This is the stanza that I liked most. Nice poem.

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Ken E Hall 05 June 2015

the best gem of a person and your so right and maybe a little sparkler for the wedding ring...nice words in the meanings of this gem of a poem...regards

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Allotey Abossey 21 May 2015

Very Fascinating... Good one there...

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Howard Johnson 26 May 2013

An enjoyable read thanks for sharing readability

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