The Birds Of Passage Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

very nice poem... every word make ir almost perfect. great talent in here. best wishes, ana

Ver nice, look forward to reading more of your work. Kind Regards

Persian, you are always an interesting deep read. Of late, I've thought of humans as blind inhabitants of a sparkling habitat. Some awaken to the realization that opening up, looking about, engaging with others and nature is a must, the only way to live and learn. Thank you, Carol

very well written 10/10

great piece, an interesting meaning that you offer here..

simply a brilliant poem. nice rhymes and sweet reading...10

there is something quite mystical in this one...nice write

sweet poem.............lots of wisdom......well penned

Brevity is beautiful. The wings of these birds are dipped in sunlight. Warm regards, Sandra

through these words I can the see the birds soaring high in the skies of realization