Leaves Poems: 160 / 500

The Breeze

Rating: 5.0

Autumn's Breeze

The breeze will help trees
To get rid of many leaves
There is no reason to suppose
The breeze serves its purpose
It blows the leaves off the trees
Cuts the weight comes big freeze

Shedding leaves benefit trees
Much weight breaks the trees
There is no reason to suppose
The breeze serves its purpose
It blows the leaves off the trees
Cuts the weight comes big freeze

Falling leaves make way for snow
Trees can't grip leaves and snow
There is no reason to suppose
The breeze serves its purpose
It blows the leaves off the trees
Cuts the weight comes big freeze

In spring times and summer's
Leaves come in some numbers
There is no reason to suppose
The breeze serves its purpose
It blows the leaves off the trees
Cuts the weight comes big freeze


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Thursday, October 9, 2014
Leaves Poems: 160 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: Nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The thought comes to me; seeing as, this time of the year most trees sheds leaves; the breeze helps to blow off the leaves!
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A creative and compelling composition on one of the functions breeze. Well done my friend!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 February 2015

Falling leaves make way for snow Trees can't grip leaves and snow. Very, very wonderful poem shared really. Autumn's breeze is amazing and wonderful really.

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Luo Zhihai 25 January 2015

This is a beautiful poem. I like it! And I would like to translate this poem into Chinese. Can I?

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The Pundit 10 January 2015

I gave it ten Clarence! ! Nice work.

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Sophy Chen 29 December 2014

This poem is a very good example for me and i will try to write in your rhythm really Thank for your poem Clarence Prince. Sophy Chen

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Nature! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2016

why doesn't the breeze just wait till Spring and blow them back on? it would save the tree a lot of work making new ones. bri ;)

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Paul Amrod 09 February 2016

Hi Clarence I would love a poem in the Jamaican dialetic, This poem is wonderful. I love the wonder of an autumn breeze. I like writing poems about autumn. You can see An Autumal Lyric or Autumal Renaissance if you want to read my stuff. However I can speak this wonderful dialect. Let it go and give me something and write a letter when you do. Peace, Paul

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Bharati Nayak 23 January 2016

Such a beautiful song, a sweet song, breeze that blows away the pressure (dried and old leaves) from the tree so that tree can rejuvenate and regrow green leaves.Marvelous observation of a nature.

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Jr Cuyam 28 September 2015

Nice poem! full of meaning.

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