The Conference Of The Hearts Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

The Conference Of The Hearts

Rating: 4.9


Love has its own beauty
but we place deep below
these sensation charms

from the soul
that we have been
make us pure, Love

none of our words will show
we touch and sigh and dream
and wish we were the mere dust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 12 January 2010

The ending line is true in many ways like your lines.

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Ruerd Visser 12 January 2010

Make us pure, love let it be so. Well done! May angels inspire you, Boomfather Ruerd

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

' Love has its own beauty' so good in entrance... wow! nice poem!

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Antonio Liao 11 January 2010

a reflection of the a genuine hearts.....wonderful......God bless a 10+++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 January 2010

True, the source of love is heart.

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Obinna Eruchie 20 February 2010

Love shines as light in bright beauty to perceived by warm hearts amidst the challenges of life. An enchanting poem about love.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 25 January 2010

a good contest! Heart the symbol of LOVE I like your conference! ! ! ! LOVE LOVE LOVE, the cure for all diseases!

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 16 January 2010

Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for your invite. I liked the poem for its free flowing style and deep meaning.. Love in truest form is only next to God. Nice use of choicest vocabs. Rated Highly. Request you to read my poem ACROSTICS and comment thereupon Rajkumar

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 15 January 2010

A pure poem well penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Anthony Foster 12 January 2010

The downside of love is deep, The slippery slope is steep, Yet for all that we chance the joy, Of for a monster that can so easy destroy.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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