The Finale Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

The Finale

Rating: 4.4


O, Great Magician!
Show your magic, show expedition
People are waiting
Waiting in a daze
Show them voodoo, muddle in a maze
Show your wonder, show your power
Show them a flower
Turning into a pigeon
Beasts are infesting
Your sacred region
Make them stop, bring to a halt
Deep into the earth
Plates overlaped
Move them a milli, fix that fault.
O, Great Magician!
Show your magic, show expedition
People are waiting
Looking for a glance
For this is their last chance
Show them an empty paper box
Turning into a white hairy fox
In their dark bare eyes
Light some fire, blow little pox
Waiting in unison, ready to clap
Stage is set in a houseful trap
Show your muscle, don't just dump
One small jump, one small jump
And a tiny punch
Reverse the damn universe
Show the final big crunch!

Thursday, January 1, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: disasters,drama,magic,universe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Salu Salu 10 January 2009

a pack up day is the wish to solve our panicridden phenomenon..... rgrds/salu

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Blue Eyes 10 January 2009

very nice poem i loved it u really have a way with words.u can play with them the way u want to create such inspiring poems.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 09 January 2009

God and human mess up in this magical poem, Naseer your talent is extraordinary.

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Ana Zaldivar 09 January 2009

such a great poem, heart touching. BEAUTIFUL.... made me inspirate... ''the finale'' it's wonderful! ! i'll give you a million out of ten! ! great job!

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Kite Remedy 09 January 2009

what human? what God? It instigate many thought to just by reading this.. beautiful..

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Jaume Joan Alzamora Llull 22 January 2015

I will 😘

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Merna Ibrahim 15 January 2009

I like your style so much, and your high imagination.! ! ! fantastic

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Sandra Martyres 14 January 2009

Great and imaginative imagery...the Magician and the grand finale... Keep writing Naseer

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Min Sia 13 January 2009

Very deep thought..and very well narrated..and the hope you uprise..still I can imagine what have you written... A very seductive piece..truly marvelous!

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Nasreen Dawood 11 January 2009

deep...you have such talent describing the current invasions, the origin of natures disasters and most of all the belief by some that the sun will rise from the west due to the reversal of the earth...and GOD...so many things you touch upon but i've named a few...fantastic piece, thanx.

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