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The Fourth Of July 2018 (2)

Rating: 5.0

Today is the Independence day of the USA
but I do not want to create a poem about that, oh nay!

it is the first birthday of my first grandchild
a baby boy with a soft heart, smart and loved
you can see that at the sparkling eyes of this happy child

currently he is in Ghana, with his parents, of course
that is for his mama's medical specialization, temporarily

his sweet mama has baked an apple pie
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The Fourth Of July 2018 (2)
Wednesday, July 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday,god,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Created with much care and love,
AD. On the 4th of July 2018 - @ 17.12 hrs. PM-West European Time
Your Grandmum
Sylvia Frances Chan
Dutch Poetess

P.S. He was born on the Fourth of July 2017, at midnight 00.15 A.M.Hrs. Western European Time
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2018

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your recent poem as member poem of the day. This is a very nicely penned memorable affectionate poem. The Independence day of the USA has come in memory at first. We are are glad to hear about first birthday of your first grandchild who is in Ghana with his parents. Your grandson is cute baby, smart and gentle. May God bring fortune and joy for him! We are sending rich blessings for him. This is an excellent poem...10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 February 2019

Thank you dear Poets and dear Poetesses for your valuable feedback, precious compliments and worthy comments on the poem Tribute for my first Grandchild, a beautiful babyson, which was chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as the Member Poem Of The Day on the SAME DAY as I have submitted the poem. This happens very seldom as Dr. Pintu Mahakul also remarked when he responded this MPOTD. Thank you very much dear poets.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2018

wonderful poetic expression //

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2018

Thank you so much Mahtab, your response on the poem means a very lot to me. G.B.U. Amen

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Luz Hanaii 02 September 2018

How sweet, your first grandchild. Happy belated birthday for your precious boy. He will be so happy to read this in a not so distant future. Best to you always and your family.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 December 2018

Thank you so much dear Luz, I appreciate your response most precious. Your visit to my poem site most appreciated. Best to you too and to yours. G.B.U. Amen.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 04 July 2018

Good wishes with the child. Independent America will serve the child at its best, expected. Thanks for sharing. Pranab k c

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I must disappoint you Pranab, my grandchild is born in the Netherlands and that lies in West-Europe. I haven't known at all that when a child is born in the USA, that Independent America will serve this child at its best. I don't know about this at all. Thank you for the info.. A 10 for the Vote.

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Pranab k c 04 July 2018

Good wishes with the child. Independent America will serve the child at its best, expected. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you so much for your comment and feedback. This must be Pranab again, right? Our nephew resides in the USA, but was born on the 2nd of July in 2012. And my first grandchild is born on the 4th of July previous year, but he resides in the Netherlands, an excellent country. A 10

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