The Great War Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Great War

Rating: 5.0


Take my love, dear
And don't hold on too long
For I must go somewhere
Where the guns and tanks roam
And in the trenches, I will be reminded of you
As I breathe my last
I'll remember yr kiss the best, my love
Until the cry of the dove

Monday, November 14, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: bittersweet love,war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 14 November 2022

Great war poem LeeAnn. Too marks.

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2022

Until the cry of the dove.

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Anjandev Roy 14 November 2022

Excellent piece indeed.....thank u, dear poetess....

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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2022

LeeAnn, you have so brilliantly created a masterful work of art on the themes of bittersweet love and war. Truly outstanding!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 November 2022

A sad and lovely portrayal of a final memory of love on the battlefield.5 stars

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Fantastic poetry! I am reminded of the famous ballad The Highwayman, in the poetic standard and emotiveness of the poem. Loved it, LeeAnn. Top score

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 15 November 2022

No war but it's full of love till the last breath; nice to read

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 November 2022

Thank you LeeAnn for this touching poem.......10 + To my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 November 2022

War is always tragic whether one wins or loses. A sad but truthful poem written with intense feeling.

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 November 2022

Just beautiful LeeAnn x A wonderful write x

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