The Greatest Poem by lady grace

The Greatest

Rating: 4.9


cheers to the eyes who sees me
for he can paint me on his mind

cheers to the lips who utter sweet words
for he is the best guardian ever

cheers to the toughest heart on earth
for I give my complete trust to him


he's at the distance
seems he's a star
from the earth i look even if how far
he's like a sun… i could not reach
satisfied by the brilliance that he give
daytime turns dark
moon doesn't shines
still waiting when he comes

for i want to trace his eyes looking at me
and see how he talks to me
hear his heartbeats even at once
to know this greatest man's charm......


(revised from my original name's entry)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 24 September 2009

Bravo! This piece is written so deep, so honest, so sincere in short very imaginative and yet romantic. Cheers to the Lady...10+

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 September 2009

wow.... Cheers to the people who sees you.. and that included me.. great write, my friend... flowing with depth in thoughts 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Romeo Della Valle 23 September 2009

Brava! ! Great, deep and honest feelings coming straight from your heart and freely running through your vain until reaching your mind, turning this powerful and sincere love into a beautiful poem to be viewed and felt by the whole world...you got my vote, my dear Lady Grace. Love and Peace, Romeo

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 September 2009

'CHEERS' to you and the distant person whom you have referred to in this nice poem.

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Catrina Heart 23 September 2009

Cheers to the people who sees you! ! ! wow this is such a very fine tribute to the healer and inspirator.........Great job! ! !

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I will join all the others and say Cheers to you My Lady Grace. Such heartfelt writing and written with style and grace. 10 love Karin

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Akram Awadat 30 September 2009

great work, well done it is fantastic lines

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Obinna Eruchie 29 September 2009

This is remarkable and dear from the heart.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 September 2009

excellently penned! cheers! 10+

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Indira Babbellapati 25 September 2009

it reads like a prayer to the divine almighty!

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