The Man Poem by lady grace

The Man

Rating: 5.0


the blue sky that traces our smiles
and white clouds that hide our tears
two hearts on silvery wings
faded laces on the wind...

Authenticated pages bind us
With scented candles and cords
Coins and floral freshen up
And blessing from our great olds...

Kisses sealed our marriage
As your lips touches mine
Smiles are in our faces
Without warnings and faulty signs...

i look at the photographs...remembering the past
you walked ahead..leaving me alone
from heaven you're watching me
you left me and will never return..

the best friend i have in my life
the laughing figure when I cried
the strongest man, the only man for me
my beloved husband, happy anniversary…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 18 August 2009

well written''''''''''''''''''''''''''''10s

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2009

very touchy and nice wording! 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 17 August 2009

A heart felt piece beautifully written.

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Ying Escalona 16 August 2009

tubig sa tumoy tumoy nana-ug sa tunga-tunga pobre ug datu maka-inom mag-libog ang huna-huna TUBA! ! !

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Ninya Zulueta 13 August 2009

it still amazes me, how can words make one (almost) cry and feel for a stranger.poetry shall put all walls into ruins i guess..very nice.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 August 2009

every line is written from the heart. mark 10 shan

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Rafique Farooqi 21 August 2009

So beautifully written words......our hidden emotions get wings to soar....

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Vinod Ak 21 August 2009

A splendid poetic tribute to your husband! Wishing you both a very happy wedding anniversary!

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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009

A VERY HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO YOU BOTH! Hope he has read your poem? -Raj

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C. P. Sharma 18 August 2009

A touching rememberance with flowing poetic tribute. CP

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