The Prayer 2 Poem by lady grace

The Prayer 2

Rating: 5.0


oh destiny of my life
show me his honesty
give me clues and signs
thru his words and integrity..

oh my angel of fate
guide me as you always do
don’t leave unanswered questions
let me know if he loves me too...

oh my prince of time
let me know my future
let the days pass without distinction
straighten the warped trail easy on foot..

oh wisdom of truth
bless me with unending intelligence
in the field of poetry I inscribe
that brings happiness to my life..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 26 August 2009

Yeah yeah well written as always

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Surya . 26 August 2009

beautiful and clever poem.let your wish be fullfilled.lovely and interesting a 10++++ from me surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 26 August 2009

very nice prayer indeed Lady Grace.. Written from heart.. that is what I always like about your poems, very touching... good to read..10 lovess shan

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Fay Slimm 26 August 2009

Honest statement of faith and well presented.... prayer-poetry is some of the most difficult to bring across to the reader - - you have more than achieved this....10 plus from Fay....

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Deborah Cromer 25 August 2009

Very dear and heartfelt. Nice work on this beautiful piece of art. DC

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Catrina Heart 27 August 2009

wow......such a fantastic theme.........great work i love the jumping off the subject...like a charming rabbit hopping one at a time...........10

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Romeo Della Valle 27 August 2009

Excelente! very good, you got my 10+, Keep it up! , Love and Peace, Romeo

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C. P. Sharma 26 August 2009

Patience and true faith answers all querries and heal all wounds. True payer is unconditional surrender, no scope for doubts or questions in it. However, it's great poetry. Thanks for sharing it. CP

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

oh wisdom of truth bless me the unending intelligence in the field of poetry I inscribe that brings happiness to my life........prayer may help you all the ime with actingas clear beacon inlife..very good and heart touching....10 redmine o, lord...prayer...prayer for friend and new..u will not rain

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 August 2009

very nice...really touching like a soft sound playing in the air I love the flow, my friend.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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