Our hearts beat in unison
the rhythms of our life
sometimes calm and slow at beat
but sometimes fast and full of fright
We dictate the way that our minds think
by the beating of our heart
Because if the heart stopped beating
our thoughts would never start
We walk the pace of our life
to the pulsing in our veins
as the blood rushes through arteries
to help us deal with all life's pains
The blood of life grows slower
as we meet our dictated age
Trying to remember
The youth that it once gave.
Now time has passed inevitably
as I lie here thinking in my mind
Of the blood rushes and happiness
that we will all leave behind.
So remember all the goodtimes
when your blood would evenly flow
and don't thing of the bad times
When your blood went around to slow
CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your outstanding poem as the poem of the day. Now time has passed and good times have come. Our hearts beat in unison and we feel beauty of rhythm of every beat. This poem is thought provoking as well as thoughtful...10
Alan, such a splendid poem of the day... Congrats for being chosen...10+++++ but I can’t rate due to ads😅😅😅
excellent expression - like to quote last stanza So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow ///// Sadness cant not touch my heart, my soul cause I am ecstatic and delighted dweller of the earth
So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow - -Time will surely flow, blood will eventually slow down, but remembering good times will keep us happy. A wonderful poem.Congrats for being selected as the Poem of the Day.
A great poem with a meaningful message. Very uplifting. Congratulations, Alan.
Indeed, enjoy the youthful moments, congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day! Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us!
Uplifting words and wonderful to read. A lovely write to start my day.
Beautifully expressed- the flow of emotions in life vis-a-vis the flow of blood in our veins which is a part of our aging process. Thanks & Congrats, Alan.
The youth that it once gave! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic poem...Inspiring to proceed with courage and whatever be the circumstances just move along..10+