The Truth Poem by lady grace

The Truth

Rating: 5.0


Lousy
that’s typical...

mind doesn’t sleep
intelligence never fall...

may not shine in this field
but excel in other ground...

good riddance
from this world of fools
crazy welcomes unwise
liars meet hypocrites
pretender never sleeps
awake to every mistake...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 15 September 2009

nice little refelctive poem...without a title...although i am sure it cud hv been found...maybe u liked the aura of mystery well written cheers

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

from this world of fools crazy welcomes unwise liars meet hypocrites pretender never sleeps awake to every mistake... ------- nice vivid written poem........well expressed thoughts!

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Carol Gall 15 September 2009

truth is present in this great write 10

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Carl Harris 14 September 2009

An interesting poem with no title, Lady Grace, something a bit unusual. I liked your poem, though it expressed some bitter feelings which everyone has every once in awhile. Carl.

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~ Jon London ~ 14 September 2009

A very honest truthful write my lovely, you express deep thoughts in this clever little number...well penned 10

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Seema Chowdhury 25 September 2009

don't give up. life has its ups and downs. you will get your share of goods days and will meet good people too. pl see some of my poems too.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

A terse poem that says a great deal about the challenges of the mind.

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John Knight 17 September 2009

Hi Lady Grace - sometimes we feel we are on the wrong side of reality. You seem so low in this poem that things can only get better and better and better. Reach out we are all there for you 24/7. Score it a MAX for pathos! Love in Poetry - JOHN

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Hazem Al Jaber 16 September 2009

nice and well written, , you tried to tell alot through this short one, ... nice.. hazem al..

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 September 2009

crazy welcomes unwise liars meet hypocrites pretender never sleeps awake to every mistake....................ingenious write by imagery, and beautifully expressed by the natures of human being and the words of wisdom,10+++,5thanks for sharing

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