The Value Of Life & Oxygen Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpury

The Value Of Life & Oxygen

Rating: 4.8


Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
We shall thank you then for death.

People round the world gasping for breath, breathless,
short of breath, some unable to catch their breath,
some breathing their last,
some on artificial costly breathalysers.
How many times do we thank God
for the countless free breaths we breathe our entire life? ?
Oxygen o2 more valuable and scarce than diamonds nowadays.
Respiration, the main need of all life
Those who eventually recover from covid and find their breath again
can finally breathe a sigh of relief.
Yet heavenly sights in paradise will be sure
to take our breath away anyway.

Life or afterlife
Here and hereafter
Life's a gift from God
Now and thereafter
Why end it here and now
Why not extend fun and laughter?
When my DNA and RNA expires with me
May God Resurrect and revive it in me
I live and die for an extension of life in afterlife
God grant me that part eternity
To search for the meaning and purpose of life
is to search and find the Creator of all life
i know there's out there somewhere
in Allah's universe, a heavenly portal
that will lead me to eternal bliss
designed by Allah the immortal.
Imagine a perfect heavenly life with no fear, death or problems
That's a life to die for, when Allah transports us to those realms.

An abode with no sickness or illness
Only peace and total eternal happiness
No viruses but rather real flying horses like real Pegasuses
We could get to ride and fly the universe
with angelic wings without planes or buses
But you have to work to earn and deserve that heavenly paradise
Just follow God's latest holy book, so perfect and so wise.

The Value Of Life & Oxygen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2021

What a wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! An encompassing write that tackles spirituality and intricacies of life.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2021

Great thoughts to ponder about. Very discerning and well expressed write. Top Marks, ! ! To my Poem List.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 June 2021

This poem was a joy to read

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Lasaad Tayeb 25 June 2021

A fantastically crafted poem; truly, beautiful, you've written a delightful story.

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M Asim Nehal 26 June 2021

Superb poem with great message. Liked it.5*****

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M.J. Lemon 20 July 2021

Those first two stanzas really capture our human frailties. Magnificent verse!

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Susan Williams 05 July 2021

Top ratings on this poem straight from your heart and soul!

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Susan Williams 05 July 2021

Those opening lines are a heavenly gift to your readers!

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 June 2021

Great message worth following. Very nice poem

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2021

You have shared so much with us. Thank you for your words.

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