The War Within Me Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The War Within Me

Rating: 4.8

There's a war within me
As though, someone threw a bomb onto my heart
And my brain has melted when you left
All I see is the turmoil of the aftermath
That no tears can quench
I wander into the belly of the destruction
As I try to untangle the words at night.
I must go through the abyss
Because I know you are there in paradise

Saturday, February 19, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: inner world
Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 February 2022

This is such a sad and moving poem, delving the chaos and heartbreak of grief, with heartfelt emotion.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 February 2022

In paradise wonderful LeeAnn. God bless........10

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Kim Barney 22 February 2022

Very well written, LeeAnn. I give it five stars.

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Belle Wassermeister 22 February 2022

Great poem, LeeAnn. I also wanted to leave a comment on your newest one but couldn't see a place to do it.

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Jayne Davies 19 February 2022

So touching LeeAnn x

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Nabakishore Dash 31 August 2022

Brilliantly said about the war of words in your heart that melted your brain and also destroyed the stomav

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Maria Mitea 27 August 2022

Fabulous work! It goes right the way in my favorites!

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Anjandev Roy 25 August 2022

That no tears can quench......excellent...

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Michael Cochrane 23 July 2022

Heartfelt, poem, from the heart.

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Richard Wlodarski 05 May 2022

LeeAnn, I can really feel your pain. So very well expressed in this heart wrenching poem.

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