Thee Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Thee

Rating: 4.7


Here I draw
The warmth kiss on the chest of the blue sky

From the crystal flows of a poetic river
I drink the rhythmic love

I love thee
but they say-"My love is a fictitious hawker
If I have no deep market of love in my heart"

Quiet I am
in the alley of roses
Drawing exhale and inhale breaths

Monk for love I am not a slave
Maybe, love can tolerate all


10.09.2020 Chattogram

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 11 September 2020

Well crafted poem... Love is divine forget what the world thinks and rejoice in your faith.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 September 2020

A well penned poem. Truly Impressive....10+++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2020

Wonderful thoughts of one who is in love. So beautifully versified. Great imagery.

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Beautiful and passionate. Love is so sacred and so nobody can say " My love is a fictitious hawker If I have no deep market of love in my heart" ...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Warm kiss of nature! ! ! ! With the roses of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 11 September 2020

Very interesting poem with beautiful expressions

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

'Quiet I am in the alley of roses Drawing exhale and inhale breaths' - good expression.

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