Thee Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Thee

Rating: 4.7


Here I draw
The warmth kiss on the chest of the blue sky

From the crystal flows of a poetic river
I drink the rhythmic love

I love thee
but they say-"My love is a fictitious hawker
If I have no deep market of love in my heart"

Quiet I am
in the alley of roses
Drawing exhale and inhale breaths

Monk for love I am not a slave
Maybe, love can tolerate all


10.09.2020 Chattogram

Friday, September 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 11 September 2020

A well penned poem. Truly Impressive....10+++++++++++

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 September 2020

Well crafted poem... Love is divine forget what the world thinks and rejoice in your faith.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2020

Wonderful thoughts of one who is in love. So beautifully versified. Great imagery.

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Beautiful and passionate. Love is so sacred and so nobody can say " My love is a fictitious hawker If I have no deep market of love in my heart" ...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Warm kiss of nature! ! ! ! With the roses of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 11 September 2020

Very interesting poem with beautiful expressions

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Khairul Ahsan 11 September 2020

'Quiet I am in the alley of roses Drawing exhale and inhale breaths' - good expression.

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