Time! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Time!

Rating: 5.0


Time, like an ever rolling stream
bears all the life's secret
So live it in a manner
that when you look back at life
There should not be any regrets nor
any trails of heartbreaks and shattered souls
You left behind.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Time!
Sunday, July 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: regret,time,trail
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 03 July 2016

Masha Allah, Great piece of advice, Na jaane kinte shikar hue is waqt ke hathon mein....Sab apni dukh bhari daastan chod gaye....Chand hain jo dusron ke waqt se sabaq lete hain warna sab kuch kar guzarne ki Aarzoo mein waqt se khelte hain, aur phir pata chalta hai waqt unse khel raha tha....Stay blessed for ever...Full marks.10+++

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Kelly Kurt 03 July 2016

Life will provide good and bad, neither should be dwelled on

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2021

Beautiful poem of insightful poetess. Fascinating words from a fantastic poetess. I like the picture added very very much, since the words on the card is the truth.Marvelous!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 November 2016

A good advice. But can we manage a life without strife and pain, in spite of being good and virtuous? ! Well Dharma helps us all, as long as we uplift Dharma in our lives

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Nosheen Irfan 05 July 2016

A very insightful n philosophical piece of writing from your poetic pen. Time can both break n heal. It is upto us whether we learn from it or let it destroy us. A beautifully written piece. A sure 10.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 July 2016

Like an ever rolling stream! ! But, with the souls of Hope in every situation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kishore Kumar Das 04 July 2016

Don't regret for the past...move forward....'time' sends this powerful message to everybody.......through your touching poem......

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