Time(A Haiku) Poem by Practicing Poetess

Time(A Haiku)

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Eleven fifteen.
The clock stopped precisely there.
Is it an omen?

Sunday, March 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Plotz 06 May 2019

I looked at the clock after reading; said 10: 54 - Is that true? Or does it depend on where we are now? Or where we were?

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It depends on where we are now, but remember- - This is only a haiku, a created piece of writing. Eleven fifteen has no special significance. It was only used because it had the proper number of syllables to make a haiku! Thank you for your thought-provoking comment! : -)

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It depends on where we are now, but remember- - This is only a haiku, a created piece of writing. Eleven fifteen has no special significance. It was only used because it had the proper number of syllables to make a haiku! Thank you for your thought-provoking comment! : -)

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Matthew Holloway 24 March 2019

great haiku really enjoyed

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Thank you, Matthew! : -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2019

hours and minutes on hundred twenty degree angle it's good for resting and dreaming...!

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

It's good for resting and dreaming, if you're not under time constraints! Thank you, Mahtab, for taking the time to comment!

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Prabir Gayen 24 March 2019

Eleven fifteen. The clock stopped precisely there. Is it an omen? .... Good question....but don't think of Omen..

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2019

Haha, Thanks, Prabir.! I'll try not to think of what it might mean!

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