Can this crazy world stop for a while?
So, we could have a coffee and chat
About life in general
What I am trying to ask is
Can you peel me off this couch
Before my eyes go blind
From the screens I watch
I am bored but it makes good poetry
For I think of nothing
And words come through
I passed five minutes in writing them
And fifteen in drawing
I don't think they are any good
But they waste time
A poem that resonates with most of us. Liked the opening and fifth lines....beautiful poetic expressions.
Great write indeed.... wonderful to read.... thank u... LeeAnn.....
Writing and reading poetry is NEVER a waste of time! Ingenious title and poem, Poetess Friend!
Nicely summed up 'I passed five minutes in writing them And fifteen in drawing I don't think they are any good But they waste time' 5****
Sometimes we just need to express from heart and mind whether or not there's a rhyme....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The title alone is a poem all on its own. (Gee, had no intention to make my comment poetic) And keep on idling if this is what stirs your creativity (btw, you hinted on an artistic side in this poem. You should add them to your words. I'd love to see them)