Saturday, August 3, 2013

To All Poets (Revised) Comments

Rating: 4.9

We continue creating

a picture with words
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Heather Burns
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Lovely poem...We become the master of our canvas always striving for perfection....Beautiful write. Loved it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 August 2013

You are already perfect Heather, I echo all the poets who have commented already... Siya_! !

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Elena Sandu 06 August 2013

How true! A wonderful poem, thank you for share! What a happiness for those who can became the masters of own canvas. For most of time I feel to be only its helpless slave. No matter how I mix the colors or how the brush would strike I can hardly paint the beauty that my eyes see, nor the bits of pains discovered in ugliness as in real life, often to find myself either lost inside trying to escape from image either trying to follow a dazzling connection which will slow its flow as soon as my pen touches the paper.

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Poetheart Morgan 05 August 2013

In that way, that you describe so well, we search for our inner cure and our bliss to share with the others. Thanks Poetess, very beautiful.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 August 2013

Yes, always striving for perfection. In a few words, you have drawn such a masterpiece that is almost perfect.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 04 August 2013

And you are already perfect. You have so many lovely words for everybody. Love you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 August 2013

always striving for perfection. Nicely said. Poet creating pictures with words for others to see. Thank you.

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Valsa George 04 August 2013

Whether we achieve perfection is a debated question, but we can always strive for it! An enjoyable write!

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Lucifera Santez 04 August 2013

perfection might be utopia, but you come most close of achieving it. a very insightful write. :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2013

always striving for perfection.... nice poem..10 always with perfection with action and with lovely action

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Savita Tyagi 03 August 2013

Striving for perfection always! Something new to learn always! I owe a big thank you to poemHunter poets. Lovely write Heather!

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Sallam Yassin 03 August 2013

and always striving for love U make the sun in very cloudy day shine

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Sallam Yassin 03 August 2013

and always striving for love U make the sun in very cloudy day shine

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Joseph Anderson 03 August 2013

I'm with you, still striving, but perfection seems a long way off.You'll get there before me. A brief, truthful and pleasing thought-10 anyday

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Dave Walker 03 August 2013

So true, we will always be searching for perfection, but with us been our own worst critics will we ever find it. A great poem.

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