Traveler Poem by Bharati Nayak

Traveler

Rating: 5.0

I am a traveler on this earth
Unknown is my destination
I meet so many co-travelers on my way
My friends, my family and even birds in the sky.
I meet many bends and corners
I collect many stones and flowers
While the stones make me strong
Flowers soothe my soul
I know, up and downs
Are part of this journey
Before I meet the end
Of the road
I wish, I could leave
Some sweet scented flowers
That would relax
The tired travelers
Coming behind me.

25th March 2023

Tuesday, January 16, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,flowers,journey,life,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 16 January 2024

The birds in the sky see you traveling by. Though you travel far, you're always a star! *****

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2024

Thank you Kim Barney for your encouraging comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 16 January 2024

So beautifully inked. We all are travelers and have to leave this inn someday. Very nicely expressed. Thanks.

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Bharati Nayak 19 January 2024

Thank you Anil Kumar Panda for stopping by and giving your valuable comment.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 January 2024

A meaningful and beautiful poem.Liked the closure lines, they depicted your love and care for humanity. Very thoughtful write.

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It's a good wish to leave sweet scenting flowers behind for those who follow

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2024

Nice poem. i find a nicer heart therein. Liked

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Nosheen Irfan 15 February 2024

Stones and flowers, they all have a purpose. The journey of life is beautifully depicted. It's lovely to be a traveller who leaves behind a legacy. Your beautiful words are a gift for mankind!

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Rob Lamberton 08 February 2024

Thank you for the sweet smelling flowers! *****

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 February 2024

An elegantly written, lovely and meaningful poem.5 stars!

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