Trial-Haiku-2 Poem by Bharati Nayak

Town sleeps in silence. Thanks for sharing.

why trial.....yours is the real haiku....town sleeps to silence.......a quotable sentence...10 marks to you full...

that's ok.. the edited version of your haiku has been accepted for the compilation: '' red sun dips in sea crabs run waving their pincers - town sleeps to silence ''

So much happens in the natural world that many of us miss! Thanks for sharing a great poem! !

A magnificent haiku dear poetess... extremely well penned.5 stars and to my favourites.

Cool and beautiful. Imagery.

I am no expert on the writing of Haiku. I know mine do not have that special nuance... flavor... otherworldliness of the masters of the style. I think this piece has that blend of natural events with a comparison or contrast with a human event. I vote you continue writing Haiku, you definitely have that delicate touch.

A wonderful Haiku dear madam! Thanks for sharing............10