Twin Triplets.No.14. Birth N' Death, Deadly Love - Poem by Valsa George

Kumarmani Mahakul (8/13/2018 6:39:00 AM)

If waking is a mini birth
And sleeping, a minor death
Aren’t we born and dead everyday? ...... yes, we are. everyday it is happening.

Oh! How thousands immolate themselves........in true love it happen.

Both Triplets are well penned. Beautiful poems shared amazingly. (Report) Reply

Akhtar Jawad (4/18/2018 9:52:00 PM)

Every new breath is death of the last breath. Thoughtful! (Report) Reply

Edward Kofi Louis (11/28/2016 1:22:00 AM)

Life and death! Walking along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

Heather Wilkins (8/10/2013 5:48:00 PM)

a good write on birth and death (Report) Reply

Chandra Thiagarajan (7/30/2013 9:48:00 AM)

I am with you, Valsa in your 1st triplet as in the same vein I had composed a poem! As for your 2nd one the deadly love is well spelled! (Report) Reply

Ramesh Rai (7/29/2013 5:39:00 PM)

life is action action is life (Report) Reply

Patricia Grantham (7/28/2013 6:21:00 PM)

Twin short and inspiring writes. Love like coal can grow hot
and burn then turn to ashes when cold then grows old! Nice
write. (Report) Reply

Danny Draper (7/28/2013 6:20:00 PM)

Succinct and powerful coupling, the first evocative the latter provocative. (Report) Reply

Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/27/2013 9:29:00 AM)

Contrasting triplets. We are also dead when we see injustice and are helpless to act. Thank you. (Report) Reply

Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/27/2013 7:27:00 AM)

simple, meaningful and beautiful
thanks for sharing (Report) Reply