Twin Triplets. No.19. Life, Death Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets. No.19. Life, Death

Rating: 4.6


LIFE

Precious and priceless
But gradually weakens and withers
And opens the door to death

DEATH

Dreadful and unpredictable
At once disconnecting and conjoining
And opens the door to life

Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V P Mahur 29 March 2014

Dear Madam, I would just say WAO Amazing words like ancient Indian Poet Bihari Lal Who filled 'saagar in the gaagar' and thanks fooooor your nice comments. your joke is so tickling, like an affectionate sparkling. Thanks a lot!

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Md Asadullah 30 March 2014

Life of this world is temporal life, the real life is the life of the hereafter inbetween them is death, Poem is small but the message is big, thankyou :) 10/10

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Kavya . 01 April 2014

wow....so true and so nicely put in three lines! it says all!

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

Intricately enmeshed and interconnected. Nice write. Succinct and wise.

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2018

Life is Precious and priceless but it opens the door of the death, so also death is unpredictable but opens the door of the life. A wonderful creation in your hand dear madam, many thanks for sharing these Twin Triplets.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2016

Unpredictable! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2014

Life or death, both are mysteries, but I am afraid of life not of death.

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Savita Tyagi 19 April 2014

Very nice. Few words say it all.

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

3 lines yet a whole summary of our existence has been described...................very true

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