Valsa George

Twin Triplets. No.5. Infinity, Hope - Poem by Valsa George


Parallel lines stretching, stretching,…g!
Neither made to intersect
Nor meant to pause


A rain cloud suspended
Between the vault of heaven above
And the parched land below

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Twin Triplets. No.5. Infinity, Hope by Valsa George

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/15/2016 8:07:00 AM)

    Faith and hope
    Always learning and, moving on. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards (8/19/2016 9:28:00 PM)

    hey! ! i like this. to MyPoemList.

    bri :)
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  • Akhtar Jawad (8/8/2016 10:22:00 AM)

    It's infinity of time and space that I am constrained to believe in a God. Stretching of parallel thoughts start from ing- I need God, ng - no God, g - God. (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2016 3:20:00 PM)

    Infinity stretches forever, even from the parched land to heaven it continues to stretch. Beautiful lines of life! 10++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2015 1:09:00 PM)

    If I can reach the beauty of this twin triplets... it is the plot of life, for all the novels especially love.
    And it is also the fuel for burning, burning inner self.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar (5/25/2015 12:32:00 PM)

    Twin Triplets are so beautifully presented....Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (2/14/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Love your twin triplets Valsa - Hope here, great verse. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (2/13/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Yes, yes stretching not stretched - an important distinction. Succinct wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2013 9:33:00 AM)

    Distilled thoughts in the Twin Triplets of Infinity and Hope are greatly STRIKING! Your imagination is very ENCHANTING! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 27, 2015

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