Valsa George


Twin Triplets (No.2) Doldrums, Lost Love - Poem by Valsa George

DOLDRUMS

Mind, empty of music
On a lonesome beach
Beside a soundless sea

LOST LOVE

Once I saw rainbows in the sky
Once I caught the melody in the wind
Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Twin Triplets (No.2) Doldrums, Lost Love by Valsa George

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/8/2014 7:21:00 AM)


    When our love is with us every thing appears beautiful and when our love is not with us the entire beauty is vanished. Not only thinking our entire behavior depends on our happiness and sadness. A lovely write. (Report) Reply

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  • Patricia Grantham (9/10/2013 10:54:00 AM)


    Yes Valsa doldrums and lost love can go hand in hand. When
    you lose someone it does throw you into a slump. Hopefully will
    look up and see the rainbow once again! Enjoyed.
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  • (1/27/2013 6:35:00 AM)


    Both your twin triplets are enchanting with depth of meaning which is very captivating.
    With regards,
    Chandra Thiagarajan
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  • (1/27/2013 6:20:00 AM)


    Both your twin triplets are each enchanting with depth of meaning.Fabulous, Valsa. (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (1/24/2013 10:27:00 AM)


    Short simple and touching feel sad but enjoyed reading as the poetess enjoyed writing. (Report) Reply

  • (1/24/2013 4:43:00 AM)


    enjoyed reading it, , , , (Report) Reply

  • (1/24/2013 2:02:00 AM)


    The great debut of love to life
    Once I saw rainbows in the sky
    Once I caught the melody in the wind
    Now only the cloud laden sky and a jar in my ears
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  • Vipins Puthooran (1/23/2013 11:22:00 PM)


    Once I saw rainbows in the sky
    Once I caught the melody in the wind
    I like thsese two lines, , , , very beautiful! ! !
    Top marksss! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Xelam Kan™ (1/23/2013 11:23:00 AM)


    wow pure melancholy that takes minds away to a lonsome haven
    adorns only by wrekage ship after a devistating storm....
    in few words you gracefully embebed all the melody of lost love....
    inspired penning...
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 26, 2015


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