THOUGHTS
Winged messengers of the brain
Ever in motion, never at rest
The sneaking invaders of the quiet
HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION
An ocean in a drop of water
The Cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being
Your THOUGHTS and your HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION are really awesome! Awaiting more of TWIN TRIPLETS
ur poem made the winged messengers of my brain move doubly.. thx for sharing.
Triplets for a couple of thoughts blowing like a breeze...
Very innovative presentation Valsa - love the concept and the depth of thought you express.
Simply loving these triplets. I am glad to have gone to your poems and find these wonderful reflective poems. Thank you Valsa for these gems of poetry.
depth writings /// thoughts and highest perception motherly womb of expression of human existence///
Both the triplets are thoughtful and philosophic, but THOUGHTS has more poetic beauty.
Wow! This is the 1st in the series that I've read and I'm in total awe! Valsa, I love all of your poetry. And now, you've taken it to an even higher level. Can't wait to read the rest in the series! Bravo! ! !
Wonderfully crafted on thought and perception. Cute imaginary. Perception is an ocean in a drop of water whereas thought is winged messenger of the brain. Nice presentation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A divine spark in every being Very thoughtful. I love the ideas you present in your poems.