Valsa George

Twin Triplets (No.3) Thoughts, Heightened Perception - Poem by Valsa George


Winged messengers of the brain
Ever in motion, never at rest
The sneaking invaders of the quiet


An ocean in a drop of water
The Cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being

Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts

Comments about Twin Triplets (No.3) Thoughts, Heightened Perception by Valsa George

  • (2/25/2018 6:01:00 AM)

    Wow! This is the 1st in the series that I've read and I'm in total awe! Valsa, I love all of your poetry. And now, you've taken it to an even higher level. Can't wait to read the rest in the series! Bravo! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/28/2017 9:15:00 PM)

    Wonderfully crafted on thought and perception. Cute imaginary. Perception is an ocean in a drop of water whereas thought is winged messenger of the brain. Nice presentation. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/16/2016 1:17:00 PM)

    Thoughts! ! Working with the mind. Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    What a wonderful poem. Thought truly is not at rest. Always oscillating here and there. great write (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/31/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    Very innovative presentation Valsa - love the concept and the depth of thought you express. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2013 4:53:00 AM)

    Triplets for a couple of thoughts blowing like a breeze... (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (1/29/2013 4:13:00 AM)

    ur poem made the winged messengers of my brain move doubly.. thx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (1/27/2013 7:39:00 AM)

    Your THOUGHTS and your HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION are really awesome! Awaiting more of TWIN TRIPLETS (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (1/27/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    A divine spark in every being

    Very thoughtful. I love the ideas you present in your poems.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 26, 2015

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