Valsa George


Twin Triplets (No.4) Course Of Life, Blunt Truth - Poem by Valsa George

The Course of Life


Life begins with a Whine
Moves on with Whoops and Woes
And ends with a Whimper






Sour Truth


I look into the mirror
It bluntly states the truth
And oft, painful is the truth

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Twin Triplets (No.4) Course Of Life, Blunt Truth by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2017 9:26:00 PM)


    Course of life and blunt truth have been fantastically expressed. When child born he cries, in life path he faces whoops and woes and in old age he whimpers. The mirror states the truth bluntly. Truth is often painful. Beautifully crafted and amazingly shared. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/16/2016 1:19:00 PM)


    The whoops and woes of life! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (6/3/2016 2:03:00 PM)


    Someone isn't getting OLD, is one? ?

    It's just illusion, what you see in mirror.
    To avoid confusion, have another beer!
    Bri

    :)
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  • Soulful Heart (4/23/2016 9:15:00 AM)


    truth n truth n nothing but the truth......u r simply great... (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2016 3:16:00 PM)


    Truth can be very painful when one looks within, realizing how truly human we are with all our faults and burdens, yet life still finds joy and happiness within each of us somehow. Love this blunt poem, gives thought to who we are.10++++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2013 8:00:00 AM)


    The twin triplets series are all gems gleaming with life and truth! All so beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (2/4/2013 12:48:00 PM)


    Thanks for your twin triplets series Valsa, love this one most of all, Life begins with a whine and ends with a whimper, (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2013 9:16:00 PM)


    Life begins with a Wine........ (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (2/1/2013 10:22:00 AM)


    Grim is the face of truth.Good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 26, 2015


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