Unborn Poem by Adeline Foster

A powerful and thought provoking write! As always my dear friend Adeline! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

Short and Entertaining too. Thanks for ur comment on my poem. U ar sweeter dan d freshest sweet- berries! Lol. Keep up d good work dearie. Kingfemi

I am also against abortion but in rape cases I support it. Good write

This is a very appealing piece, Adeline. I can even relate this to the situation of unborn infants or any aborted lives, hindered from developing or shining. Thanks for writing this.

Wowee! That's a striking kind of sentiment. It grabs you fast. The message comes to the reader quickly. Thanks, Mark Walters

A very emotive subject, yet simply and beautifully expressed here.

A difficult and divisive subject, you have addressed it well.

Adeline the thought of that Is this a word or feeling....iip

first I LIKED IT AS A POEM. i liked the rhyming sequence. maybe i'll try it IF i remember it. i found the comments almost as, if not more, interesting considering how i read the poem and Adeline's poet's notes. it appeared as though two of the commenters thought the poem was about the length of a human's life....i mean a human which IS born and lives for a number of years. and at least one reader feels Adeline is against abortion; she may be, i don't know, but i don't see that the poem says she is against it. thanks Adeline for sharing. bri (it would be interesting to know your views re abortion. i'm at least pro-choice, if not pro-abortion, but i do hear that decreased birth rates are causing some problems for some countries now and probably will in the future, especially when added to increased numbers of aging/disabled/sick/nonworking adults. thanks for the poet note.

Just like the poem, Life itself is brisk like morning dew. Great write.