Unfaithful Poem by lady grace

Unfaithful

Rating: 4.8


would you smile if you saw me crying
would you run and never look back
would you laugh if you saw me dying
would you come and kiss me goodnight...


would you be happy if i touch your lips
would you swear that you'll always be mine
would you lie, would you run and hide
unfaithful love stays in your heart...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

is death, the same as DYING! thanks for bringing in another set of DUELITY into my Existance..... with best wishes for a REWARDING week :)

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 July 2009

hey i d be thrilled if you can kiss my cheek... so here is a flying kiss to you! ! ! ! lol! ! ! with love shan

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it is a yes. you did it well here.....

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Ency Bearis 25 July 2009

a querry deep on a soul...for a self exam of conscience tolerance... nice write....10

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After Nikujn's comment on your poem there is hardly any room to praise it any further. It is beautiful and gives you reason to write more

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Aranthabailu Ummar 28 September 2010

sun is the truth and moon is false dark is the field of earning untruth but poor boody have the strong soul it will be always there Nice to you I love your poems A Ummar

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Eyan Desir 05 April 2010

Well some ppl say they are faithful But all creatures can be decieve Like the beginning it was unfaithfulness that brought us here... Who am I not to be Maybe i will give u a flower if i saw u crying

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

Love has so many different forms and one of them is unfaithful love. Wonderful.

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Rafique Farooqi 06 August 2009

Hard hearted love, kept with mad to smile over pains, of beloved. good write read mine, written truth,

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Mamta Agarwal 27 July 2009

very touching, almost childlike in its innocence. anxiety, longing, all brought out so poignantly.10 Mamta

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